NaPoWriMo 2014 – I

Peddle the metal
unresponsively–

pile unrequested
bile and homages
to the dank

and stormy pelican hoop danglers.

Author: Aidan Badinger

Wharved.com I am a poet. I write poems. Titles and subjects and subsequent readership are all part of one fragmented figment of our universe, and it's nice that we take it so seriously. Hopefully the craft remains and grows stronger for our children.

One thought on “NaPoWriMo 2014 – I”

  1. Interesting subtlety,
    That first line is so veiled,
    And dank is such a beautiful word.
    I would like enjoyed an easier invitation to your thought,
    But bravo nonetheless.

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