NaPoWriMo 2014 – I


Peddle the metal
unresponsively–

pile unrequested
bile and homages
to the dank

and stormy pelican hoop danglers.

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One thought on “NaPoWriMo 2014 – I

  1. Interesting subtlety,
    That first line is so veiled,
    And dank is such a beautiful word.
    I would like enjoyed an easier invitation to your thought,
    But bravo nonetheless.

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