NaPoWriMo 2014 – I

04/01/2014

Peddle the metal
unresponsively–

pile unrequested
bile and homages
to the dank

and stormy pelican hoop danglers.

One thought on “NaPoWriMo 2014 – I”

dtdeedge says:

04/01/2014 at 18:53

Interesting subtlety,
That first line is so veiled,
And dank is such a beautiful word.
I would like enjoyed an easier invitation to your thought,
But bravo nonetheless.

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