NaPoWriMo 2014 – I


Peddle the metal
unresponsively–

pile unrequested
bile and homages
to the dank

and stormy pelican hoop danglers.

One comment

  1. Interesting subtlety,
    That first line is so veiled,
    And dank is such a beautiful word.
    I would like enjoyed an easier invitation to your thought,
    But bravo nonetheless.

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